I think it could do with a much tighter crop to help get rid of all the blown out grass in the back and show more of her awesome expression! His left hand seems blown as well, or very close to. A slight burn there would help take the focus of it and onto them. Looks a bit soft as well? May just be the compression.
I think its cute and fun and I like it. With a couple tweaks I would love it
I can post the original and you can edit it if you like. I used to use paint shop pro, and I upgraded to a mac and had to succumb to photoshop and honestly, I don't quite know what I'm doing yet. But, I'm learning. It seems like it's more complicated to soften things in photoshop than it was in psp.
Just a quick 45 sec edit to show how I think you could bring more focus to them - and warm it a tich - but maybe that's just because I'm sitting at my desk freezing so the images feels a bit too cool for my liking
I think the warm would go better if they were wearing summer clothes, because now I feel like they are hot and sweaty lol. btw, I "liked" your photography page. mine is "painted by the sun"
Nice shot, tho I think Kristal's crop is pretty much spot on what i'd do. The warmings a personal thing as said already. Mine's somewhere in the middle. Great expression tho.