At the ballpark, feedback welcome

[skid2964]

I took this last night at my daughter's softball game.

 

[usayit]

I like it....

At first I was going to say that it is underexposed but for this photograph it actually works in its favor. I wonder if seeing your daughter's face would define more emotion in the subject.

The only other thing that comes to mind is your signature. It is Much brighter from a low-key photograph which brings unnecessary attention to it.

 

[skid2964]

As you can see I took your advice and toned down the signiture.

Thank you very much for your comments.

I like it....

At first I was going to say that it is underexposed but for this photograph it actually works in its favor. I wonder if seeing your daughter's face would define more emotion in the subject.

The only other thing that comes to mind is your signature. It is Much brighter from a low-key photograph which brings unnecessary attention to it.

 

[Terri Walsh]

I like it!