Attempt at Street Photography...

[iphoto]

This is taken few months back...with a P&S, comments welcome

 

[JonMikal]

your attempt was very good! i love the diagonal line that runs through the image and your subject placement was excellent! the empty space works for me! :thumbup:

 

[AIRIC]

Works for me, great image.

Eric

 

[spike000]

A closer crop with more detail from the faces would work for me.

Either a longer lens or try B&W - generally tends to work.

However - as JonMikal says - nice work with the natural lines

 

[iphoto]

Thanks a lot for feedback, Street Photography is really what I like..but still little scared to go closer of the subjects

 

[Force of Nature]

wow thats really cool, I like it!

 

[mentos_007]

ok, when I saw a title I expected more people!!! almost a crowd!! ok but the shot is ok for me

 

[terri38 9]

There is absolutely nothing wrong with your composition here. Really nice!! The brick pattern is terrific as is your placement of the subjects. :thumbup: Keep up the good work.

 

[spike000]

You will need to go a lot closer to publish this - as in approach them and get a model release!!

I usually find a business card, model release form and the promise of a photo (as soon as they write to you) usually works. Never had any letters from model releases yet!

Good luck - but seriously - try a longer lens!



Spike

 

[iphoto]

Thanks for the advice mike. It was taken I think with D70 and since I got D70, I am damn scared of pointing this big boy at people

Can you pl tell me or show a sample of what a model release form is. I have no idea about it...sory if it sounds stupid

You will need to go a lot closer to publish this - as in approach them and get a model release!!

I usually find a business card, model release form and the promise of a photo (as soon as they write to you) usually works. Never had any letters from model releases yet!

Good luck - but seriously - try a longer lens!

Spike

 

[John E.]

Good shot and good eye for catching it.

 

[iSellJerseyShore]

Can you pl tell me or show a sample of what a model release form is. I have no idea about it...sory if it sounds stupid

Check out http://www.dpcorner.com/all_about/releases.shtml for a few sample releases...

or Google it



-iSellJerseyShore

 

[elsaspet]

I love it just the way it is. The expanse of the stones make the couple seem even more secluded and intimate. It's almost voyourism on what looks like a stolen moment with two people.
Great Job!

 

[PonsTerra]

There's really something to this shot. It's like a scene from a movie... I think it's great!

 

[Smith2688]

I like it, but I agree that more facial detail would add to the picture...it'd give more emotion to it.