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Funny and almost there IMO. There's something going on with the right side of the mannequin...glass (??) that's throwing it off balance.

The B&W works well with this.
 

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I like this photo. Love the title also. But the mannequin in the armpit of the mannequin thats in focus distracts me...Blends in way to much i think. But i still love it
 

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My immediate impression is that this would want to be cropped closer, at least on the left (to eliminate the bright spots to the left of the mannequin). Maybe a crop from below that would no longer show that the mannequin has no legs would make this otherwise clever composition even "tighter" and more compelling?
 
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folks, i appreciate you taking the time to
share your thoughts and observations.

@LaFoto: a tighter crop would suffocate
the intended image.
 

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