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In the first one, the background looks fake and is kinda throwing me off.

But besides that, everything looks great!

And this is just me, but for some reason I hate the look of being covered in sand, like her feet are in the first photo. It just comes across as gross to me xD
lol, well it's not fake and I like sand...but to each his own. Having studio lighting in a natural environment is something new to me and the cause of that look for sure.
 

Two things glare here. And it's not that they are bad or good, they just stand out. 1: the intense rim light. Don't get me wrong, I like a nice rim light, but here it makes her skin seem almost translucent. Secondly, her unmentionables seem to be wet (from the shirt ties? Maybe), which seems... Off. I'm a big fan of OCF, so maybe that's why I'm so biased towards the first. I like that "fake" look, mentioned above. [emoji106]
 
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Two things glare here. And it's not that they are bad or good, they just stand out. 1: the intense rim light. Don't get me wrong, I like a nice rim light, but here it makes her skin seem almost translucent. Secondly, here unmentionables seem to be wet (from the shirt ties? Maybe), which seems... Off. I'm a big fan of OCF, so maybe that's why I'm so biased towards the first. I like that "fake" look, mentioned above. [emoji106]

Thanks, ya there are some wet spots from the surf that drenched US...I barely got out with camera overhead...
 
Two things glare here. And it's not that they are bad or good, they just stand out. 1: the intense rim light. Don't get me wrong, I like a nice rim light, but here it makes her skin seem almost translucent. Secondly, here unmentionables seem to be wet (from the shirt ties? Maybe), which seems... Off. I'm a big fan of OCF, so maybe that's why I'm so biased towards the first. I like that "fake" look, mentioned above. [emoji106]

Thanks, ya there are some wet spots from the surf that drenched US...I barely got out with camera overhead...

Sounds like a wonderful shoot! Pretty lady, fancy gear, messy sand, and surprising waves?! Sign me up!
 
Twice. Once i was prone, laying in the sand and had to actually roll, the way a little kid does, to get away from oncoming surf all the while holding the camera up as far as I could...must have looked incredible!
 
In the first one, the background looks fake and is kinda throwing me off.

But besides that, everything looks great!

And this is just me, but for some reason I hate the look of being covered in sand, like her feet are in the first photo. It just comes across as gross to me xD
lol, well it's not fake and I like sand...but to each his own. Having studio lighting in a natural environment is something new to me and the cause of that look for sure.

Lol, I kinda assumed it wasn't actually fake. I'm just letting you know that's how it looks to me. It reminds me of the green screen images I've done. I think it just takes practice. I haven't done it much myself either.
 
Were these shot in the Marin Headlands?
No, it's a little cove I have frequented for 24 years about 10 miles north of Santa Cruz.
Sweet! I miss the CA cost!

Do you ever shoot in the Headlands? The bunkers, rolling hills and beaches all make for amazing locations.
 
Dayum I need to get some pretty girls for photoshoots!!


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After almost 3 months without a camera in hand I had time to take a little beauty to the beach for some well deserved photo time yesterday!

A Standford University student without prior modeling experience I think she did pretty well.

1)Beauty Dish fill
_POR8173-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr


2) Just playing with silhouettes
_POR8337-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

3) This is a 50% crop, the non-crop is seen on Flickr
_POR8277-Edit-2 by WSG Photography, on Flickr

One more 4)
_POR8326-Edit by WSG Photography, on Flickr

First, 3 months without a camera...you should see a doctor about that! Thanks for confronting this problem head-on and submitting the proof that you're working to move past it by shooting. Lovely model and a nice series--thanks for sharing.

My comments...

#1: This truly does look like a Green Screen shot. The shadow in the lower right is distracting to me--is that your shadow? In part it's distracting b/c it seems inconsistent...her's is sharp and well-defined, this one is fuzzy.

#2: Nicely executed. I especially love how you've captured the cloth/wrap here.

#3: My favorite. Her skin/face seems a little light. Otherwise it's a lovely shot.

#4: Also very nice though I think the pose (the lower half) seems awkward. For instance, if you cropped her at the waist, I think it would be an even more effective shot.

Nice work.
 

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