Barn near my house

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I think there is potential - I like old farm buildings.

Is there room to open up the shot a little? I don't think there is quite enough in the barn to make it the only item in the shot. Maybe a little more background.

Also, there's no white in it. Adjust you levels a little.
 

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I think there is potential - I like old farm buildings.

Is there room to open up the shot a little? I don't think there is quite enough in the barn to make it the only item in the shot.
+1!

Need more of a foreground or background in this shot. It's a good shot, however you could get more out of it. I'd like it better without the shrubs, but of course you can't change that. :) Unless, the other side of the barn doesn't have it...and you could shoot it from that side.

If not...def need some whites...or brighten up those shadow areas...(shurbs)
 
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Thanks you, really appreciate it :D let me work on it, I can see what you mean about the white. I think I'll redo the entire shot :)
 

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Right away the first thing I noticed is that you a) Either have the clarity slider pumped up way too high or b) have over sharpened it. The clouds look a little strange and there's haloing around the barn... most noticeably where the roof meets the sky.
 

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Right away the first thing I noticed is that you a) Either have the clarity slider pumped up way too high or b) have over sharpened it. The clouds look a little strange and there's haloing around the barn... most noticeably where the roof meets the sky.

+1

I really like it, just needs tweaking.
 

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