kinda busy for my tastes... maybe if you got rid of the big white block in the middle of her face and changed the chopped up eye back to normal i think it would be less distracting, the hair on the her right side doesnt seem to match the rest of the photo and i think geisha's wear their hair up nice and neat
just my 2cents but i suck , and couldnt even come close to doing anything like this so good job on all you have done!