pascalriben
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That are two bikes (or one and a half).
As with other collections of yours single pictures as standing alone have small impact. They are just like taken away from the context of a longer story. That's my feelings.
This particular shot has quite limited range of tones, feels grey without much of a brilliance. Highlights are squashed, this is not pleasing too much. :neutral:
This picture is working well alone for me: I like the composition with the objects and the shadow around the bicycle. Sure, it's not the most seductive of the gallery but it's always like this in a serie. For the quite limited range of tones in this particular shot, I'm surprise...
This picture is working well alone for me: I like the composition with the objects and the shadow around the bicycle. Sure, it's not the most seductive of the gallery but it's always like this in a serie. For the quite limited range of tones in this particular shot, I'm surprise...I just expressed my opinion Pascal. As a bystander. Off course you have stronger emotional connection with your pictures as I do with my.
They need the context of the gallery to help deliver your vision.
The problem for me in critiquing your work is that I have seen so much of it that I subconsciously place it in a gallery.
This unfortunately falls into the pascal "bucket" for me. It's an "oh, it's one of THOSE types of images". Too predictable.