TCampbell
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Good thread. Been gone all day. I was thinking--this might look interesting rendered very,very high-contrast, almost Kodalith-like, or maybe as if it were printed on something like TP6 B&W (very high-contrast) enlarging paper. I took a quick look at it in a different way, just slightly rotating it, so that a small amount of the window and brickwork was eliminated, adding a vignette, then toning it a cool,dark color and adding a little digital fill.
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Is this any better? Or just a weird re-work?
I do like what you've done with it, and the left side isn't as distracting with the slight crop (although I will revisit and try a wider crop to include more of the building / machine-shop wall.) I also like the intensified contrast. The color is a bit green but I like the contrast.
I took the image into Silver Efex Pro and started playing with the B&W processing to find a contrast and film that I like I liked, but I still think I need to improve the composition.
This has been very educational for me. I appreciate all the perspectives on what I might do to improve this. Something about the old hard iron and rivets on the boiler keeps drawing me to it (and it's actually in an area of the village that I don't think was intended as an exhibit.)