boston harbor/bikes

[nrois02]

thought this would be the best place to post this. let me know what you guys/gals think!

there is a spot in this photo that really bugs me after i did a little photoshopping. i normally dont photoshop but since i just got it on my computer i thought i would try a few things. if you can find it let me know and if you know how to fix it it would be great! hint: its by the people in the photograph. thanks again!

 

[nrois02]

no one has any input?

 

[mat wildlife]

This just looks like a pooly taken snapshot. There seems to be no subject to the image: the bikes clutter each other and are spoiled by the blue coat;the people are oof; and the boat and the rest of the harbour are badly composed and oof. Sorry to sound so negative, you were wondering why no comments.

 

[chris82]

Mat I can see why you might think this as it is a bit cluttered but Id like to see a B&W version,Infact I think this shot is a perfect candidit for a mono.

 

[nrois02]

whats a mono?

 

[samal]

monochrome - Black and White

I think the idea was good , but the fact the the pedal and the wheel of the bike are cut off bothers me and the background is a bit cluttered

 

[nrois02]

ok here is the b&w
what do you guys think of this? i like my b&w's to be on the darker side if night time photography. so let me know if there can be anything to improve on. thanks

oh and mat... i was looking for feedback on what you think of how it came out.not negativity

 

[TWoods450]

I've noticed that on this forum, the majority of people like to talk **** and not give helpful info.