The picture is good, well framed and PPed but it could even be a little more dramatic in the processing.
Why are you posting in the beginner's forum?
This would get more and better attention in Sports or people.
why hang around in a huge pool of people who don't or can't manage their pictures?
start putting your pictures where there are people who are better than you and whom you can learn from.
Many of those that you can learn from won't bother with the beginners' forum.