Along w/ distractions mentioned above,
on #1 have her press LESS on her face (barely touching the cheek). On the same scenery, at least for my flavor, I'd prefer to have the background underexposed by about a stop or totally blown out (emphasizing the bride). Other then #2, again its just me, but I don't really like full-face-view - makes her look bigger then she should look vs #2. I'm a big fan of lighting, overall it seems very flat an unflattering, unlike #2.
Good Luck
Joe.