My take: this is a nice series. I don't like the blue background with her makeup. In fact, her goth look lends itself well for B&W. Also, b/c her hair and eyes are dark and a lot of shadow or B&W works really well for her, some dodging (so her eyes have more detail) is something I'd suggest.
That said, I think the use of fabric is something I love and especially in the first and last shots. And I think you've got a range of diverse looks and poses here. I can absolutely see why she was happy with the results.