Bridge in Tempe, AZ looking for some C&C

[AlphaNex5n]

Took this yesterday at Tempe Town Lake, Tempe AZ! C&C Welcomed!

 

[J_T]

In my opinion, I would crop the some of the water out to put focus on the bridge.

 

[Desi]

Some bridges are beautiful, some not so much. But within the repeating geometric patterns on this bridge, I'm sure you could find several excellent images. As it is, this is a shot mostly of water and sky. The bridge doesn't have enough presence. You might want to try in the evening with a darker blue to the sky and a long shutter time to catch streaks of car's lights as they cross the bridge.

Welcome to the forum!

 

[chris82]

As already stated bye others the crop is a little wide but with cropping some of the water out you run the risk of putting the bridge smack bang in the centre. I think a reshoot is in order... but thats just my oppinion

 

[Designer]

Well, don't give up on the bridge, AlphaNex5n, just keep on going back there, seeking a different position, different lighting, etc. Try to emphasize the structure without adding too much extra stuff in the shot.

 

[LungFish]

To me your angle is a bit flat. If you get a bit closer to the bridge you can get more bridge and less water in the shot.

 

[AlphaNex5n]

Thanks for the inputs everyone I will be going back for improvement