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[Ricky Ortiz]

C&C welcome

 

[Ricky Ortiz]

39 views and no comments is that a good thing?:er:

 

[abraxas]

39 views and no comments is that a good thing?:er:

Could be worse. At least you don't suck so bad that people feel the need to tell you how much you suck. I've had plenty drop off the page with 0 comments. It took me quite awhile to reach the nexus of zero.

Nice shot, nice mood, but a bit weak on composition in my opinion. Maybe try keeping everything from going on right in the middle of the image?

Got more?

 

[CowboysDaughter]

Nice subject, but I might have stood just a tad closer to the bridge, and faced to the right a little more so that the bridge was leading into the far left third of the picture. Ya see what I mean?

Also, on black and white, I like the pictures to be more darker tones rather than the faded greys like here. I would have edited this a little bit to deepen the contrast a little, maybe darken the highlights.

All in all, good start!!

 

[Rere]

Hi,

It works for me. It almost has an infared feel to it. Did you do this on purpose in Photoshop? Try Curves for more contrast.

 

[Ricky Ortiz]

well thanks for the c&c and i see what you mean when you say i should have gotten closer and not had it go so much in the center i'll have ot go back to this spot and try at it again. thank you.