Burlesque show pics revisited

[lizheaemma]

So I beat myself up a bit over missing focus in that burlesques shot for a bit then I went back to see if maybe there was a sharper shot that I had originally passed over. Low and behold there was, I'm not as in love with the composition but it's far sharper focused on her eye's.

C&C welcomed and appreciated!

link to original thread and peek-a-boo shot
http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/...o-gallery/267278-burlesque-not-work-safe.html

Original

and the one that I'm not as quite as in love with the composition of...

 

[ManhattanShutterBug]

I think they would look a lot better in color.