I like the little 39th Ave and Union Street that's just inside the right-hand border of the image. On-screen on my iMac, this image displays as about seven or so inches wide, and as such does not reveal much detail in the faces of the seven people...this is the type of photo that looks better when seen at large size. Overall, it has a decent balance, but it looks a little bit low-contrast in terms of local contrast...the lighting ratio is wide, as is normal, but the image is slightly "flat" in some areas.
To me, a west coast native, this scene represents a part of New York, a scene that does not have any real significance to me,personally. I think the body language of the figures is interesting, but cannot literally "see what they're doing" at this on-screen size. This is a big problem when we take a large image, and shrink it down to fit into this site's web-based format...some pictures simply demand to be seen large, and this is a great example of that. I would say that, from appearances, this shot has some good elements, some good stuff, and perhaps is seen say, on a 30- to 50-inch wide screen, would really be more interesting than when it's been reduced to seven inches across.