C&C: Looking for the picture within the picture

[Compaq]

Saw this by accident the other day. iPhone 4s used to capture it. Edited in PS. I really like it, but there are some things I wish I'd done differently. Those things are written in white under this. Mark the space, and my thoughts will reveal themselves. (look after you've looked at the image).

I wish I moved slightly to the right, centering the tower a little more. Also, I wish I'd shot lower, so that I didn't see some of the roof. I also played with the thought that maybe I should crop off the bush, but I left it as it were. This one is uncropped.


Kyrkja by Anders Myhre Brakestad, on Flickr

I thank you for your opinions!
Anders

 

[eugene_jenea]

the first thing that comes to my mind is that this picture is a great illustration for a children's book

 

[Flyhigh]

Wonder what it would have looked like in HDR?

 

[Compaq]

Wonder what it would have looked like in HDR?

I'm trying to climb out of the HDR hole

 

[FanBoy]

Nice natural frame around the church steeple. It's ashame the tree's shadow fell on the steeple though.

 

[sovietdoc]

Nice shot but I am not a fan of these completely false colors. Why not make it natural looking? I am sure it looked pretty.