C&C on Pirate Please

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[nynfortoo]

Looks pretty good, but you've lost his hair and right arm into the black backdrop. I think the empty space may have worked better to the left of the frame.

Pretty cool though. What was the occasion?

 

[notelliot]

technically a good photo. but why is your pirate clean and smiley?

 

[tirediron]

Looks pretty good, but you've lost his hair and right arm into the black backdrop. I think the empty space may have worked better to the left of the frame.

Pretty cool though. What was the occasion?

Agree, additionally, find the highlights on his forehead/nose a little strong.

 

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Looks pretty good, but you've lost his hair and right arm into the black backdrop. I think the empty space may have worked better to the left of the frame.

Pretty cool though. What was the occasion?

You're right nynfortoo.... thanks for the advice.

The occasion was this costume party for little kids, and some of the parents dressed up too. They hired me as the photographer, but from an "artistic" perspective, I guess that's the only one that caught my attention to post on here.

 

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technically a good photo. but why is your pirate clean and smiley?

I'm not sure.

Agree, additionally, find the highlights on his forehead/nose a little strong.

Thanks for the C&C tirediron.