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just looking for some feedback on this. I like it but im not 100% happy with it after playing around in photoshop for a bit. What do you guys think?

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It honestly looks too saturated for me. One thing about any type of still shot, I personally love to see them all sharp and crisp. This image feels blurry and dull to me.

The positive things I do like about this image though, one being the sky and the second is the reflection off the rails almost to a mirror finish. Maybe attempt to retake this shot and get everything in focus? or at least make the subject, if being the railroad, sharp.
 
Very heavily processed.

And railroad tracks are super cliche, and you have a very basic set of tracks to boot. Just something to keep in mind.
 
^^ What they said. Overly processed, and done to death. Pay attention to the Rule of Thirds, the vanishing point is dead-center of the image. Get lower so that the perspective is more pronounced. Do something unusual with it somehow.
 
Yeah I'm afraid I would just repeat what all the others said. I played with it, and converted it to B&W. I personnal liked it better, but the shot still isn't very good. You can put a tuxedo on a skunk, but it's still just a skunk. Sorry.
 
Nice, a model on the tracks may have enhanced it
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Not that I, strictly speaking, disagree with what's been said up to now, but let's see what I find that's good in here.

I think we have to view this is basically an exercise in abstraction or graphic design, rather than as a photograph, since there are many choices made here that suggest to me that literal representation of railroad tracks isn't really the point. The centering of everything is fine, this photograph is about symmetry. Actually, symmetry just barely broken, so centering up the vanishing point emphasizes the symmetry and clarifies it. What's going on in that visual center, the curve of the track to the right and the siding? road? also heading off to the right makes this more interesting. Not very interesting, but not completely banal.

The popped colors and overall.. it's not really softness.. some sort of mild painterly effect, speak again to the idea that this is a graphic design as much as a photograph.

The various elements hang together as an idea, I think. It's not a powerful and moving image, by any means. It's not a particularly interesting image. But it is a set of coherent visual ideas.

The biggest flaw for me is that you have to look at it quite large to see what's going on at the visual center (the curves to the right) but at that point you've got a confusing and pretty uninteresting giant mass of color and texture surrounding the thing that's interesting. This might work as a piece of commercial art someplace, though, printed quite large.
 
I appreciate all the feedback. I don't think it's a stunning image or something I would even put in a portfolio or even post it on Flickr. I pretty much over did it on photoshop because, honestly, I think it is kinda boring but for some reason I still like it. It kind of reminds me of my life in regards of having a straight path laid out but for some reason it just takes a quick turn.

My main focus and what I want to do with photography is create deep meaning out of something simple. I don't think this photo really bursts out with anything profoundly but I still see what I wanted. I am still learning but I want to learn how to transform something simple into something thought provoking.

I appreciate the feedback and anymore ideas or tips are appreciated.

Dave
 
I'm sure we could find something there that would go good with rr tracks.
 
Now I'm determined to get a good shot for you guys on rr tracks. Hahaha
 
With or without the model? :lol:
 
hmmmm, I dont know yet. i have a friend who is going to model for me in a few week and im preparing to do some portraits and so i may take her to some tracks and see what i can come up with.
 
Don't forget the rope :lmao:
 

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