C&C please, Want to share another photo for

[Sharfy]

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my style of shooting 3 months ago

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[Rancor]

This is very nice. It is very soft, but I think that is supposed to be okay for this type of photo. The cropping could be called a bit "tight", but I like it.

 

[Trever1t]

The light and processing is very very nice but the crop doesn't work for me. I'd like to see just a bit more of her head.

 

[Sharfy]

This is very nice. It is very soft, but I think that is supposed to be okay for this type of photo. The cropping could be called a bit "tight", but I like it.

yup very thigh i was so closed and i have 85mm Thanks

this is my kind of shoot about 3 months ago ^^

 

[PrimeDesignsHD]

Really like it, the softness of the photo is great. I actually quite like the crop myself, but im no expert (yet )

 

[Rancor]

This one looks a bit underexposed. I can't quite tell, but the white balance may be off as well. Here eyes are a bit dark too, I think some more lighting on her face may have helped.

 

[Sharfy]

This one looks a bit underexposed. I can't quite tell, but the white balance may be off as well. Here eyes are a bit dark too, I think some more lighting on her face may have helped.

Yeah the 2nd photo was underexposed and that was 3 months ago, I hope i got little improvement with the 1st photo

Thanks

 

[Sharfy]

Really like it, the softness of the photo is great. I actually quite like the crop myself, but im no expert (yet )

Thanks, its really really hard having 85mm if your space is not enough, the shoots was taken at balcony

 

[Rancor]

Definate improvement. Proper exposure, soft, good lighting, good angle. I'd just work on the crop. At least get the rest of her forehead and some hair.

 

[Sharfy]

Definate improvement. Proper exposure, soft, good lighting, good angle. I'd just work on the crop. At least get the rest of her forehead and some hair.

Noted! Thanks much

 

[The_Traveler]

I also would like to see her face lower in the frame.
Also, the iris of her eyes are a little unclear. Perhaps a reflection of the shooter?

 

[Sharfy]

Thanks for the comments, noted for improvement