C&C Please

[B.E.S]

C&C Please.

 

[480sparky]

Very little of the subject is in focus. The sharp edges of the leaves that are in focus are a huge distraction.

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req: It's a start, but you've a way to go. From the technical side, the depth of field is insufficient to keep the subject (I assume the bloom) in sharp focus; try increasing your aperture somewhat and review the depth of field table found here for more help. Compositionally, I would suggest that this should be tighter on the bloom, and shot from a different angle to avoid all of the background distractrions (it rather looks like there's someone standing in/behind the foliage).

Just my $00.02 worth -your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[B.E.S]

Thank you. Im learning as i go. Every bit helps.