c/c please

[jols]

hope you like?

 

[jols]

or

 

[Alpha]

I'm not sure that then angle works. It creates angles on his face that draw my eyes up to the top right corner, where I find a large triangle of forehead. Some catchlights in the eyes, and a bit more shadow detail would have helped a lot as well. Perhaps the shadows can be taken care of in photoshop provided the data is there in the original image.

 

[spiffybeth]

his eyes are a really beautiful shade of brown