Holly
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HI all!! I have a question.. Someone else saw my question and they pointed out some things to me.. IM curious to know if you thought about these too when looking at my photo
Picture is here -
http://thephotoforum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=48333
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HER COMMENTS
his hand is disconnected and disconcerting.
The diagonal white in the lower left doesn't make sense.
The shadow and the curve of the chair are distracting. As are the curly frame.
his eyes are very piercing, and disconcerting. Study the catchlights in the pictures that really grab you. They are usually shapes - not white dots. Did you use a flash??
The image leaves a confused and disconcerting feeling with me.
You did a great job of focusing on the eyes. This may have been a better picture without as close a crop as you did.
Your conversion is very good.
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Curious to know your thoughts too... Do you feel the same way this person feels? Was she to strong or Right on??? Does this really need that much improvement???
Picture is here -
http://thephotoforum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=48333
]
HER COMMENTS
his hand is disconnected and disconcerting.
The diagonal white in the lower left doesn't make sense.
The shadow and the curve of the chair are distracting. As are the curly frame.
his eyes are very piercing, and disconcerting. Study the catchlights in the pictures that really grab you. They are usually shapes - not white dots. Did you use a flash??
The image leaves a confused and disconcerting feeling with me.
You did a great job of focusing on the eyes. This may have been a better picture without as close a crop as you did.
Your conversion is very good.
___________________________________
Curious to know your thoughts too... Do you feel the same way this person feels? Was she to strong or Right on??? Does this really need that much improvement???