Cards Anyone?

[ths-acid]

Well it is cold in Wausau at the moment. So I took some cards to my room, shut off the lights and used a flashlight for this picture. Overall I like it, but I want to here what you guys have to say. :thumbup:

What can make this better?
What does this picture lack?
What stands out?

Black & White

Color

 

[ths-acid]

Bump please, I would like some C&C.

 

[chrisburke]

its out of focus...

 

[Samanax]

Well it is cold in Wausau at the moment. So I took some cards to my room, shut off the lights and used a flashlight for this picture. Overall I like it, but I want to hear what you guys have to say. :thumbup:

What can make this better?

Try correcting the white balance. Maybe a little deeper DOF.

Did you use a tripod? Looks like a little camera shake going on. Maybe moving the "LOVE" up a little would help, seems too low in the frame.

What does this picture lack?

Tack sharp focus. And something about the composition...doesn't feel right.

What stands out?

The cards are upside down.

 

[OldClicker]

What the he!! is a 0 of hearts??? - TF

 

[Samanax]

It's the 10 of Hearts. Looks like he used white out tape to cover the "1".

 

[hankejp]

Wausau, as in Wausau Wisconisn? if so, how cool is that. I am from Wausau and live in Weston now. What a small world. I like the picture but it looks a little soft or blurry.

Welcome to the board and hope to have some converstations down the road.

 

[DavidElliot]

It's the 10 of Hearts. Looks like he used white out tape to cover the "1".

'shopped maybe?