Cathedral at dusk

[Ink.]

Cathedral at dusk by rzuc-butem, on Flickr
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[Starskream666]

the cut off building is distracting i'd say

 

[FanBoy]

Nice and interesting subject to work with.

 

[DSRay]

I really like this except for the blown out highlights. Well executed!

 

[Gavjenks]

I agree about the building on the side


Also, the lines all point to a focal point that consists of a couple of cars (including the contrails), which is not ideal. Perhaps down the street or at sunrise versus sunset instead, you could get lines all pointing to the church itself?

Regardless, this is very nicely colored and cool looking.

 

[Ink.]

Thank You all! I appreciate all of Your comments and suggestions.

Despite the fact that Gavjenks' proposal is very reasonable I'll stick to primary version (but let me consider it a while longer ). I simply like it better but as I suppose it is a matter of personal taste.

Thanks again!


PS
I'll try to prepare counter proposition showing the sunrise view, but I wonder if It is possible (there is high chance that the ground will be in terrible shadow which may deteriorate the overall view).