Ceasefire

Retro look? Seems more like you converted to 24 colour bmp.

Either way; I find it lack a lot of detail cause its mainly black and white (not is the greyscale, lack of colour sense either).
It's an odd composition too; a weird crop on the subject, and alignment to poles in the background is distracting (light merging with tail at the top). You also have half a pole running up the left; I'd at least crop it out...
 
Retro look? Seems more like you converted to 24 colour bmp.

Either way; I find it lack a lot of detail cause its mainly black and white (not is the greyscale, lack of colour sense either).
It's an odd composition too; a weird crop on the subject, and alignment to poles in the background is distracting (light merging with tail at the top). You also have half a pole running up the left; I'd at least crop it out...

Thanks for the comment. :)
It's not converted to bmp and I intended give it a harsh contrast in b/w.
I agree it has lots of distractions, at least some of them are left there on purpose.
 
looks like the rear view of a Thunderchief to me... but tyler is on point with the C&C.

it's a static aircraft so i'd go back and maybe try some different angles and maybe some different PP.

Thanks for the comment. :)
Next time I will try different angles.
 

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