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Vincent.M

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$steph nd bre 2.jpg
Taken with nikon d3100
New york - Highland Park

http://www.flickr.com/photos/vincenzofocker/
 
Not a fan of the processing. Not sharp at all around her face. Black and white conversion looks pretty good though, Nice and contrasty, I like how her eyes are true white
 
The editing does look hasty around her face. And i did see there was a strange gray spot on her left eye in the full size picture, but it might have been a conversion error
 
smeary, oof and the sweater is so dark as to disappear.
there needs to be some redeeming issue that prompts this kind of treatment.


sorry.
 
I think you have clipped way too much of your blacks and you have also blown your whites throughout all of her face. You are OOF and I am not feeling the composition. Another sorry.
 
I like the idea of this photograph. It looks to me like you caught the most interesting part of the landscape. And maybe the prettiest.
 

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