Not a fan of the processing. Not sharp at all around her face. Black and white conversion looks pretty good though, Nice and contrasty, I like how her eyes are true white
The editing does look hasty around her face. And i did see there was a strange gray spot on her left eye in the full size picture, but it might have been a conversion error
I think you have clipped way too much of your blacks and you have also blown your whites throughout all of her face. You are OOF and I am not feeling the composition. Another sorry.