I don't really notice the noise, but I do notice the composition. And I'm not sure that I really care for it. I mean, it looks like it should be a really cool subject with lots of lines and different contrasts and the like, but I wonder if you somehow missed the shot. I don't know how to explain that better, I'm afraid. Maybe it's the cut-off legs of the upper chair, or the bed frame on the right side. I dunno...
Dude let me start off by saying i checked out some pictures that you had posted in the past. By far the best stuff i have seen on this forum. I totally get what your saying, and if you could check out some of my other stuff and let me know what you think that would be awesome. If not that's ok too. I'm new to photography and am glad to see someone give me some good feedback. Thanks.