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dak1b

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a few pics i took walking around....tell me wat u think...C&C please!!! thanks!:mrgreen: enjoy!

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On number 1. I like the idea, but I think it would benefit from a smaller aperture, maybe f/8 or so. Enough to blur the background, but allow the eye to catch the tracks and begin to follow them, just my opinion.
 
#1 - I would have liked this shot more if the head of the spike was in focus. More DOF might have helped too. Don't like the lighting...shot at high noon?

#2 - Snapshot. Might have been nice to show what the zebra is pointing at. Too much busy stuff on the right side of the shot.

#3 - Shot is confusing...the flowers (which are the main subjects?) are lost because of the light colored buildings in the background.

#4 - I like the idea but the shot is kinda boring. It's tilting to the right too. Pen and paper on the bottom left is distracting.
 

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