clouds and a tail fin C&C please

[greybeard43 15]

air port-1-small by Greybeard16, on Flickr

 

[mikeWest]

I feel like you should've exposed more for the tail than the sky. The tail is a bit too dark. Also needs more airplane

 

[trabaker]

I feel like you should've exposed more for the tail than the sky. The tail is a bit too dark. Also needs more airplane

I second that. If it didn't say FedEx, I probably would have a hard time figuring out what it was.

 

[JoshuaSimPhotography]

And I'm not sure about the space above the tail, but that's just me

 

[cayto]

One question...what is your subject, the tail?

 

[KenC]

It's an airplane fart.

 

[amolitor]

I don't feel that the cloud is particularly felicitously positioned in the frame. It's a good idea, I think, but it wants some different clouds.

 

[Frequency]

I see a cat like ghost(head held vertical) coming towards me flying, like superman

 

[greybeard43 15]

I see a cat like ghost(head held vertical) coming towards me flying, like superman

I'll have some of whatever he is having............lol