Critics?

[laurenvictoria]

zach by Lauren Cabanas, on Flickr


chris by Lauren Cabanas, on Flickr

 

[cosmonaut]

Watch cutting those hands off the frame like that. Plus #2 could use some light behind the subject. Try Strobist.com

 

[Futurelight]

Try raising the contrast a little as well to take out the flat grey. You seem to have the right idea, just maybe need to take a bit more time on composition. Remember about the depth of field too. Hope this helps

 

[bazooka]

#1 I think the background is surreal, very interesting. But I'd like to see that continued throughout the entire frame so that I can keep that suspension of reality. When I see the green pillow and red back of what I guess is a couch, I lose that feeling. I also don't like how he's hunched over. If what I can see of him is all there was, he would almost tip over in the frame.

 

[laurenvictoria]

Thanks guys!