Critique please? :)

[xstepone]

i want your COMPLETE honesty!
i am pretty proud of this photo, i would just like opinions from others

p.s this is my first thread, sorry if i did this wrong!

its a picture of an old camera that my boyfriend gave me.
http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/4195/lens.jpg

 

[IgsEMT]

It doesn't speak to me. If I were selling a lens or buying, I'd want high details as such, otherwise, its ok.