Critique please

[Logan95]

Spending more time on portraits and need some tips please!

 

[dxqcanada2]

Images are a bit small in size ... but I do sense some focus issue.

 

[PhotoriousMe]

I like the pose in the first one but as stated too small for further critique.

Dave

 

[TheLibrarian]

Soft focus, oddly cropped. They seem slim like you composed after and made just enough room for the girl. I'm still early on but even earlier I felt like i needed the model taking up the whole image but many pics they are surprisingly small and much of the other space is some interesting background or composition of shape and color. Like a person standing on a mountain and you see a lot of the mountain, cliffs and sea. Could have used that bar more to create depth and draw a line more intentionally.

 

[pixmedic]

white balance and exposure issues on all 3.
depth of field seems adequate, but focus is hard to tell on these small pictures.
generally speaking focus looks "ok", but maybe a bit soft or slightly missed focus on 2 and 3 judging by the face.
again, hard to tell with these small pics.

 

[Designer]

How big do they need to be? If I click on them, they are large enough for me.

 

[chuasam]

not fond of covering the mouth, and odd camera angles.

 

[john.margetts]

2 and 3 have better focus on her chest than her eyes. Clicking on the pictures and then zooming in gives plenty of detail to see the focus.

 

[FITBMX]

I would work on the focus, WB, and exposure. And do a reshoot. You do have a lovely model to work with!