Critique Requested: How could I have done this better? - Nikon D100

[sashbar]

Done better? Crouched down and moved 1.5 steps to the right. Or spun the camera to "tall" and moved 1 step to the left, and crouched down, and shot a tall. The big, empty space in the upper left is not helping, hence the two suggested ways of approaching this better. It would have been interesting to have seen the clean rag he has placed on the ground there, near where he's de-greasing the parts with solvent (probably gasoline, I am guessing! lol) THAT would make sense, visually: mechanic, dish full of solvent, and a cloth laid out to place the de-greased parts on while he worked on your moto's engine.

Derrel is is spot it, I think.

 

[mmaria]

you already got some good opinions so I'll just say that I mostly agree with D and T

ok... now I'll say that I completely agree with Sharon

Thanks, that's a good way to avoid critiquing ****ty pictures!

oh... when you said it like that, it sounds soo.... true

Kidding! The real reason was that I didn't have enough time for writing a proper critique, and... you already got some good pointers