Hmph ---- weeeellllll.
Whose mood?
Slice of life of whom?
That person to the very, very, EXTREME right could stand for the mood/slice of life aspect, if only he weren't almost pushed out of the frame. I think this would be a great photo if he had only been JUST inside the red, erm, whatever-it-is-thing.
My thoughts (not even worth 2 cents...)