Cruising the waters of Bosporus (Istanbul, Turkey)

[Chris of Arabia]

I'd go with what Jeff suggested. I think you only really need to take a bit off the top to lose the other boat and you're good. You have a little more space on the right on the original than in the first version (and to the left too), which just gives it that little extra breathing room. I can't think of any reason to think it boring.