Dare I post here- part 2, Senior shots C&C welcome

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2.

 

[MarkXS]

1st one is pretty good.
2nd one looks too edited. her face looks kinda plastic.

overall good job though!

 

[keith foster]

Beautiful shots! I, also, like #1 the best.
#2 could use a little more fill light and it would be better if she were a little further away from the backdrop to avoid the shadow and take the background out of focus.

 

[bennielou]

Nice clean shot on the first. The second seems to need a bit more directional lighting.

 

[C.Lloyd]

Is there a person there in #2?? All I see is a bunch of gray!!

A different color backgound for the gray sweatshirt would look nice.

 

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Keith- yes! Back further from the backdrop- I think I need to do that on all my shoots.

Lloyd- Yep- I hear ya gray. It does sort of have a prison feel. lol