Nice backlight. Good the fact you cut away the limits of the rocks, so they seem an indefinite number. Was that close to water?
Nice shot with sun coming through, that gives it its punch I think.
Also think the second version is better processed.
hate be the odd one out, but I prefer the original. second is trying to hard, actually losing effect. it starts to look more puffy and the forground real abnormal. the first, while flat, was subtle and actually more powerful. For me at least. Guess I am just saying sometimes less is more. two cents.