Day at the park with my wife!!

[mswiech]

Spent the day at the park with my wife and learning from what others have commented on with my previous photo's so I thought I would give those tips a try. Please let me know what you think and what I could have done better or what I did right on. Appreciate all comments.

D3100
50mm F/1.8G
F/2.8
1/80


_DSC0121-2 by mswiechwaterloo, on Flickr

D3100
50mm F/1.8G
F/2.8
1/100


_DSC0106-2 by mswiechwaterloo, on Flickr

D3100
50mm F/1.8G
F/2.8
1/320


_DSC0052-Edit by mswiechwaterloo, on Flickr

D3100
50mm F/1.8G
F/2.8
1/125


_DSC0022 by mswiechwaterloo, on Flickr

D3100
50mm F/1.8G
F/2.8
1/320


_DSC0030 by mswiechwaterloo, on Flickr

 

[Robin Usagani]

You tend to put her head in the middle except #3. You should put her head about 1/3 from the top.

 

[Derrel]

Well, you seem to be able to focus well, and get good exposures and such, but the way you are utilizing the overall frame is a bit unorthodox; I think you might try filling up more of the frame with the person in these types of shots. In all of these photos, you've left a LOT of empty space on the side opposite of your wife--too much empty space, I would say. Eliminate that tendency and you'll be doing much,much better.

 

[mswiech]

Well, you seem to be able to focus well, and get good exposures and such, but the way you are utilizing the overall frame is a bit unorthodox; I think you might try filling up more of the frame with the person in these types of shots. In all of these photos, you've left a LOT of empty space on the side opposite of your wife--too much empty space, I would say. Eliminate that tendency and you'll be doing much,much better.

Thanks for that same goes for @Schwettylens

 

[kundalini]

I and my partner are of a similar age. Lovely wife, but the trick is to find those positions that, as Dr. John says, accentuate the positive.

 

[mswiech]

I and my partner are of a similar age. Lovely wife, but the trick is to find those positions that, as Dr. John says, accentuate the positive.

ROFL....I will heed that for future shoots Thanks again.