Day three, old warehouse

sanchezka · Jan 8, 2010

It's seems that I've only gotten time to take photo's at night with long exposures. I haven't really wanted this to be "my style" but at least the weekend is coming up and I can try this baby out in the day time.

Photo's been cropped. Otherwise it's as shot.

Feel free to comment, critique, etc. I'm all about getting better.

IgsEMT · Jan 8, 2010

I love the mood of the image.
Its like all peaceful during day but comes night all vampires come out

Great capture.

Moodyville-ain · Jan 8, 2010

Very well composed crop. The angles and lines flow into each other. I like the splash of sunlight, on the peak of the building. This is a very strong image. My only critique would be that I would like to see the sky just a hair darker and more stars. But that's a very minor nitpick.

........ I took the liberty again... I sure hope it's ok with you. I added a few more stars.... but I'm sure they were there, the camera just didn't see them. So I don't feel adding them is making it fake, but merely adding to what would otherwise be visible.

I think this edit does your original justice IMHO

sanchezka · Jan 9, 2010

I like the splash of sunlight, on the peak of the building

It's funny because I thought people would say something like that. However this was shot a couple of hours after sunset. It was very dark and the "sunlight" you see is from a street light. They all seem to be very orange here in japan. The scene lighting was from a lit window on an adjacent building which was white.