Dayana

[Donde]

 

[NS: Nikon Shooter]

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Yet, another latino beauty but, this time,
plagued by over sharpening artefacts.

 

[Donde]

Good to know, what about this version?

 

[NS: Nikon Shooter]

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Much better, the skins is smoother more compatible
with the complexion of a young woman of her age.

 

[Jeff15]

Good shot.....

 

[Donde]

This version has zero sharpening.

 

[Trever1t]

Are you wanting C&C? I'll offer my initial impressions if that's ok and these are only my opinions.

Awkward frame, pose and expression. I may have stepped back and taken more of her into the frame for some sort of context. If a headshot was the intended goal then perhaps not having her arch her head as such and add a mischievous smile, it just looks uncomfortable to me as is.

Lighting is ok as far as angle but perhaps slightly higher, then again the pose could adjust for that.

She's a beauty and I'd like to see more of your work with her!

 

[jeffashman]

It's a nice enough shot! I like the second without the sharpening. I agree that the pose is a little unnatural.

 

[Space Face]

Yeah, the original is better but I think TreveriT has asome good points.