Deserted in the Desert (C+C Please)

[Diffuser]

I've got a few questions around this picture, which I took today in the outskirts of Dubai.
But would first love to hear some of your critics & comments. Appreciate your efforts and thanks in advance!

60D, 24-70mm, f/5.6, 1/800sec

 

[The_Traveler]

I think it's quite disorganized and it's not clear to me what you want me to look at.

 

[ColeGauthier]

Pretty poor composition.

 

[Diffuser]

I think it's quite disorganized and it's not clear to me what you want me to look at.

Interesting, great feedback, thanks.

Is this more clear and less disorganized to your eye?

 

[Diffuser]

Pretty poor composition.

Thanks! Indeed composition is what I'm most interested in.

When I took pictures of the car buried in the sand, I saw the camel through the window.
I tried to use the railings as leading lines, which I hoped should lead the eye to the camel.

But I see it's not working out at all.

Thanks for your feedback!

 

[The_Traveler]

Sorry, I didn't even see the camel first time through.
Altho there certainle are lines that point in that direction, there are much more prominent lines that lead other places so the composition becomes disorganized and incoherent.

The camel as the center of interest is much too small in this picture to sustain any interest and its color blends in with everything else.

Lew