Detail Shots and a portrait from a wedding

[dearlybeloved]

Here's a few detailed shots from a wedding a shot yesterday.


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[Mach0]

I'm viewing these on my iPhone but the wb seems off.

 

[Tee]

I would offer that while going for a vintage feel, you still need to be aware of white balance. Did you use actions or presets on these?

 

[dearlybeloved]

vintage - yes, I have a preset for some of the different vintage feels. I could tone it out a little bit with the white balance. My monitor could be off too, so what are you seeing most?

 

[Tee]

Heavy on the greens.

 

[Braineack]

vintage - yes, I have a preset for some of the different vintage feels. I could tone it out a little bit with the white balance. My monitor could be off too, so what are you seeing most?

They don't look vintage enough and just scream poor WB.

 

[amolitor]

The two with the bride are ice-cold blue. The one with the rings and several others are a bit green. I'd expect a "vintage" look to be heavy on the yellows and oranges, so these are reading a bit incongruous. It's not horrid, and if it was consistent it wouldn't be as obvious. I think you'll like 'em better yourself if you take a pass over 'em though.

 

[twocolor]

Good on the poses, just need to work on the white balance.