Diana, My Lass
- Thread Starter eddyk
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Christie Photo
No longer a newbie, moving up!
Hi, Eddyk.
Most of these are difficult to critque as portraits. In fact, it feels like you're aim was more toward making illustrative art.
I think you're really close too with the one with the ironing board. I like the symmetrical setting created by the arch, clock and radiator. I'm not totally sold on the pose, but I do like that you included homemaker tools in the composition. The lighting is totally believable.
Nice shot!
Pete
Most of these are difficult to critque as portraits. In fact, it feels like you're aim was more toward making illustrative art.
I think you're really close too with the one with the ironing board. I like the symmetrical setting created by the arch, clock and radiator. I'm not totally sold on the pose, but I do like that you included homemaker tools in the composition. The lighting is totally believable.
Nice shot!
Pete
Christie Photo
No longer a newbie, moving up!
ummm.... OK.
I gotta tell ya... I really like your work. I wish this was in the general gallery, or even the critique gallery. This is pretty cool stuff. It should have a larger and more appropriate audience. Again, I feel this is more of a "illustrative" image than a portrait... where the maker is illustrating a mood or message.
Good stuff.
Pete
I gotta tell ya... I really like your work. I wish this was in the general gallery, or even the critique gallery. This is pretty cool stuff. It should have a larger and more appropriate audience. Again, I feel this is more of a "illustrative" image than a portrait... where the maker is illustrating a mood or message.
Good stuff.
Pete
Taralyn Romero
TPF Noob!
I like these - interesting shots.
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