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G. Ike

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Hey guys,
Comments and criticism, please? Thanks in advance :)

George

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Honestly, I think maybe i'd like it better if it were in color.
 

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I like it in B&W. However I think you should move in on the subject just abit. The extra space in the frame is distracting. Other then that good work.
 

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I like it in black and white because I think that brings out the texture a lot more than colour would, but I agree with moving the subject and having a little less of the surrounding space. I also think that this could use a boost in contrast, as there isn't really any black in this black and white. It's all varying shades of grey which makes it appear flat on my screen.
 
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Hey guys,
Thanks for the suggestions! I boosted the contrast in iPhoto and tried a few different crops and this is what I came up with. I think it looks much better. What do you guys think? Thanks,

George
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