This is such a nice composition (framing, composition, lines, shapes, focus point) that I'm almost hesitant to comment, but to me it seems a tad flat. Fuji has the ability to rendering such rich colors which piqued my curiosity about this image. So a slight edit to expand the colors, and emphasis the positives, not necessarily a better version, just a different version of an already good image.
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Thank you and nice one on the edit, I still have a lot to learn but hope to get better.
@Fujidave , nice image. There looks to be a super nice XT20 firmware update that just got released. I like your "not as saturated" version or original. It is more natural, good separation. The edited takes too much away from subject and looks over processed. I have found the less editing on a Fuji Raw, the better. I know you didn't do the edit but wanted you to know from a fellow Fuji user.