Don't Lie to Me!

[otherprof90 32]

On Fairfax Ave in L.A.

 

[Mike Lamb]

Kind of cool. I would brighten a little, crop the top.

 

[jcdeboever]

Great color, line, and perspective.

 

[Jerry_]

That picture doesn't "talk" to me ...

What did you try to achieve?
- There is no special focus which attracts the eye.
- Definitely the shadow area on the door is a problem.
- The shadows on the window are disharmonic, because the white background isn't straight.

If it was prperly lit (no shadow zones) it could be a composition of a few basic colours.
Eventually it could transmit a message if it was turned into BW, with slightly compensating the shadow on the door ...

 

[otherprof90 32]

That picture doesn't "talk" to me ...

What did you try to achieve?
- There is no special focus which attracts the eye.
- Definitely the shadow area on the door is a problem.
- The shadows on the window are disharmonic, because the white background isn't straight.

If it was prperly lit (no shadow zones) it could be a composition of a few basic colours.
Eventually it could transmit a message if it was turned into BW, with slightly compensating the shadow on the door ...

I'm not sure if you are serious or being funny, but I suspect the latter. At least that was what I was trying for. I had this one in my "Signs" folder and in my "Ha!" folder.