Downtown Oakland

[tecboy]

I was walking in downtown and photographing some buildings.
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[weepete]

Well it looks like you are handling the differences between the sunlight and the shade well. Compositionally I think 3 and 5 are best with 5 probably being the best. The Girls Inc. sign is interesting in 4, though I don't know if you could have made a bit more of it.

Overall they are OK, though there is something I can't quite put my finger on. I don't know if they seem a bit forced, possibly too empty or lacking in a well defined subject or idea.

Mibbies someone else can provide a better explanation!