Dream on

[pseychelles]

I really like this one!

 

[D-B-J]

Neat, but i think it's underexposed.

 

[paul85224]

Interesting......artistic.

 

[pen]

Neat feel to it but I would agree they it is a little flat.

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[KelJ]

Beautiful focus

 

[tevo]

It feels flat to me, a bit dark but not underexposed. Boost up the highlights if you can, add some contrast to the skin tones. Love the composition !

 

[MattS2K]

Lovely shot. I don't think its underexposed nor do I think its flat. I think the colours complement each other and the muted palette works well. I think if it was brightened and the colours boosted it would destroy the dreamy feel.

I do think it would look better with the small part of the right eye (as we look at it) cropped out completely.

 

[mishele]

I don't mind the exposure as much as I mind the crop. I feel like you need to crop it down the middle of the nose or at the very least crop out the other eye....=)
Keep shooting!!

 

[tevo]

I don't mind the exposure as much as I mind the crop. I feel like you need to crop it down the middle of the nose or at the very least crop out the other eye....=)
Keep shooting!!

Wow I didn't even notice that until you posted this. And now it bothers me.

 

[pseychelles]

Thank you